I was able to get feedback from Dr. Pryor for my previous elevator pitch. I tried to maintain the level of enthusiasm and delivery from last time. But in addition to that, I also tried to incorporate more information and detail on the actual business's revenue streams, target demographic, and marketing.
I was able to get feedback from Dr. Pryor for my previous elevator pitch. I tried to maintain the level of enthusiasm and delivery from last time. But in addition to that, I also tried to incorporate more information and detail on the actual business's revenue streams, target demographic, and marketing.
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Hey Aditya,
ReplyDeleteThis was easily the most enthusiastic elevator pitch I've ever seen. You definitely put a substantial amount of work into this pitch and provided detail on the revenue streams that really would make it clear for any investor exactly what they were investing in. I really don't know if I have any feedback to offer for this elevator pitch, well done.
Hi Adi,
ReplyDeleteWow what great energy in this pitch! I was very impressed throughout and your elevator pitch really does seem like a finished product. If you were dressed nicer I think this elevator pitch is very nearly ready for presentation in front of a board of investors. I can not really recommend any changes as this was so well put together. Just get yourself a nice suit and I think you are ready to go!